Wednesday, June 17, 2009

One Deadly Kiss Comments

Rating: 5.0

I lie here looking at you
Surrounded by sky’s of blue
I don’t deserve to die
Just because you’re shy
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You... don't... want me...
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All I wanted was one dam kiss! ! i love his part, your poem is s short, but yet portrays so much emotion, i love it...10++

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