Saturday, April 12, 2014

One Day When You Fly Comments

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What if one fine day,
you know you can fly?
I'll watch you from my terrace,
I'll see you passing by.
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Rishabh Bidya
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Yash Shinde 23 April 2014

Flying birds have fascinated humans since long! .....................though evolution failed in giving humans wings.....imagination can help us soar high in the sky! ...............A lovely write

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Valsa George 15 April 2014

A lovely poem Rishab....Flying in the air like a bird would be definitely a thrilling experience. How often I have dreamt of being a bird... Walking over clouds and sailing in the wind are simply exciting.... A person who has first hand experience of the sky will be able extricate some of the mysteries of the rotating spheres and the luminous stars! Enjoyed this perfectly rhyming poem!

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Rishabh Bidya 14 April 2014

Thank you, Paul! ! : D

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Paul Butters 12 April 2014

An uplifting poem in every way, Rishabh.

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