Thursday, April 14, 2016

One Day Too Late Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm cold, lost
What's right, how do I feel tonight
Random questions accompanied by uneasy answers
a disclaimer upon my heart: do not restart
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Andrus Cassian
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Dr Antony Theodore 14 April 2016

plead with the forces who stole my love here take me instead, I'd rather not see her all alone but lightning strikes, her body now ashes......... does this poem need such an ending? ? i dont know. loneliness in such an imaginative portrayal....... very nice poem. thank you dear poet. tony

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