Thursday, May 10, 2007

One Day In The Life Of An Ice Age* Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ice dancing. Tip-toe. Quiet.
Inlay of pebbles, boulders
Moving slow. Slower. Silence.
Mist. Fog. Trance dream.
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elysabeth faslund
fog
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John Nightingale 18 December 2007

Thank you. I was able to close my eyes and visualize easily,

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Ben Gieske 12 December 2007

Your choice of format assimilates a minute-by-minute account of what is happening. Your poems open up a lot for one's imagination as far as what is happening in the nature world.

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Derrick Clark 10 May 2007

this was very good written, keep it up.

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Derrick Clark 10 May 2007

this was very good written, keep it up.

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Derrick Clark 10 May 2007

this was very good written, keep it up.

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elysabeth faslund

elysabeth faslund

Thibodaux. Louisiana
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