Sunday, April 26, 2009

One Day At School Comments

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One day at school a sum I did went wrong
I sat and cried – I didn’t want to score out the page
A mistake to be reminded of again and again
I thought I shall rather let the whole book go waste!
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Angelina Pandian
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premji premji 26 May 2009

angel, read the selected quotes of swami vivekanada, then you will be the strongest ever!

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Jay P. Narain 28 April 2009

You are right. We should not dwell on our past, but look into future keeping present as perfect as possible.

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Barry A. Lanier 26 April 2009

Reminding this reader so many times children are packing so much luggage from home they cannot concentrate on things at hand, , , ,

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, aryaindia 26 April 2009

Every day is a new page and your poem illustrates this very effectively........good work and god bless you............arya

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