One Day Comments

this is a haunting poem.. but in a really good way

one day...hmm? ... very powerful thoughts... glad your expressing yourself... +10

One day... wow............

Death is the permanent termination of the biological functions that define a living organism.Enquiry into the evolution of aging aims to explain why so many living things and the vast majority of animals weaken and die with age. The evolutionary origin of senescence remains one of the fundamental puzzles.One of the challenges in defining death is in distinguishing it from life.Indeed when death is about to take place, there is a complete turn from all the frolics of life and one experiences the journey of expiry.......a good poem showing a trembling pendulum vibrating between life and death..........10/10.

the only thing I could think of while I was reading this was how so many things change from the mere setting of the sun... The one who bother us during the day are usually the ones running from us in the dark, mainly because they cant see the beauty in their own death....

You gave those bullies all get out this is a very good poem addresses a lot of inner and outer issues that should not be kept inside..iip.. and thank you for it.