Saturday, December 3, 2016

One Day Comments

Rating: 4.8

One day will come
When parents will be in mirth
By looking me working hard
As never anyone had ever done...
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Bakul Mattoo
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Prabir Gayen 10 February 2019

Beautiful poem., thanks....,

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 10 February 2019

that day will come.-a great motivation poem, dear poetess!

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Fog Runner 22 February 2018

May the hopes in your warm heart always remain so pure. This is lovely.

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Cheryl Tutaan 22 February 2018

Very well penned from the heart. Thank you for sharing, Bakul. A big 10! Cheryl♡

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Chinedu Dike 07 February 2018

Rich flow of thought nicely brought forth from the heart. Well expressed thoughts and feelings. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched Mattoo.

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 January 2018

One day will come When God will meet me at the horizon Catch me in his womb And would say... a great desire to be the best of creations..... lovely poem full of joy and mirth.... thank you dear poetess. tony

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Bakul Mattoo 07 January 2018

Thank you so much...Hope I will reach to your expectations by near future as well! ! :)

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Jazib Kamalvi 04 January 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Bakul. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Bakul Mattoo 07 January 2018

Thank you so much... I will definitely go for your poems :)

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Kim Barney 03 December 2016

We can all dream, can't we? A fascinating poem, Bakul. This appears to be the first one that you have posted to this site, so let me be the first to welcome you to Poem Hunter!

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Bakul Mattoo 18 December 2016

Thanks a lot Kim! Thanks for the appreciation too! :)

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