Saturday, February 7, 2015

One Day Comments

Rating: 4.5

One day it will all make sense.
But not today.
It is like when, you find a puzzle piece
and then it all clicks.
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Elisa Smith
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Chinedu Dike 10 February 2015

As you believe it so shall it come to pass. FAITH KEEPS THOSE THAT KEEP THE FAITH - Mother Teresa. I like the articulation of the poem and conviction of the poet. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Suburban Lovechild 07 February 2015

Yes, one day, it will come, it will make sense, most days don't but enjoy them anyway. Nice writing, keep it up. Please check out my poems, I'd appreciate it.

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 07 February 2015

Hello poet Elisa. I truly enjoyed this poem. Thanks for sharing. Loyd C. Taylor

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