Monday, October 20, 2014

One Day Comments

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One day I will fly,
take to the sky-
fly high above the land below,
Mountains high
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Roseann Shawiak 31 October 2014

Beautiful imagery of the seasons, soaring above them and seeing every detail imprinted into a poem. Flying is a favorite of mine, love being in a peaceful sky away from the world, your poem resonated with my spirit in this respect. Great rhythm, flows peacefully through every line of the poem. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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