Saturday, August 16, 2014

One Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was picking up the house one day,
Trying to keep my mind off of things
When I came across a beautiful note,
From when you loved me and once wrote
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Oscar Robles
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 04 September 2014

A marvelous creative poem, memories of love coming alive in passionate poetry wow. I tink i've read yors before.

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Ronn Michael Salinas 16 August 2014

Well done. The similes are great. This piece assaulted my senses; I empathized. Kudos

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Oscar Robles

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