Thursday, June 30, 2011

One Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

One day I'll Say, 'I'm Sorry'.
One day I'll make it right.
One day it wont be awkward.
And I wont block you from my sight.
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Mele Kaufusi
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 30 June 2011

Great poem with a very strong structure. Nice sentiments and imagery. Voted 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and vote my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Regards Akmal

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