Tuesday, March 22, 2011

One Day Comments

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One day it can be you and I
We could finally set free the feelings inside
When we are together it will be more than enough
After all, there’s nothing worse than caged love
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adam reed
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Pamela Sinicrope 04 November 2015

Super Romantic! I am your fool. Your dork. Your nerd and your fairytale You are my love. My heart. My angel and holy grail Way to go!

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Pari Dharawat 23 November 2011

Beautiful indeed, pleasure reading it. The day is not far it seems, That you will attain your lovely Dream. Keep writing!

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Unwritten Soul 20 August 2011

It was a good write, One day your dream will come true..we readers enjoyed this and wish it happen to you one day...it full of heart craving with emotion carving here! Keep rock in your write! _Unwritten SOul

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Raven Mcgovern 03 May 2011

I like your style of writing keep it going thanks for sharing

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Jessica Fellows 03 May 2011

Good poem. You and I seem to write about the same things some times. :) Good job.

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