Friday, January 20, 2012

One Day Comments

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One day i'll
Take off this mask,
And smile a genuine smile.
I'll look at the watch
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Siyabonga A Nxumalo
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Lasoaphia Quxazs 13 June 2013

When you say: some day it will never come, but if you say God will show me the way what to do clearly and you go on life, in your life patiently, then you will loose the rulership, what you want. One man can do something is he wants to be a martyr, but never change nation's life. Life is going as it should, only mankind wants to tell God what to do. That do not go.

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 18 March 2012

everybody wears mask, but it is an awful task, put off your tears mask down, you are a man, not fear clown)))) good poem

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Pheko Motaung 03 February 2012

Excellent! You're a master with words! Looking forward to reading new poems by you.Keep the flag flying.Ahoy! !

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Unwritten Soul 31 January 2012

You have brush and you can draw anything what you desired...your future is white canvas...and your experience just a full of great colors, mix them to create nice one as you want...drawing your country as you wish...it will came true, just keep your brush painting! _Unwritten Soul

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Marvin Brato 30 January 2012

Sentimental write, should it be mask instead of musk? Well-penned.

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Sajna Kailas 27 January 2012

wow, nice it is Siya.yeah one day, it happen, hope for the best! ! ! !

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Zibele Mrasi 27 January 2012

Respect this one much love simple

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Hans Vr 23 January 2012

Keep believing in this giant truth expressed in this wonderful poem. Very well written. We can all learn a lot from people like Ghandi and M. Luther King Jr. Non-violence is definitely THE way.

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Jinal Oswal 23 January 2012

Very well written wish Siya, that one day is not far if you keep your spirits high... Spread love and care... and my friend you are there to hold everyone.... :)

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 22 January 2012

Well written. just open your mind that you already have it. Remember what you think you have, it comes to you sooner or later, if it was meant, but if it was not, we have to let it go into the hands of God, He knows it better then we individuals.

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Vipins Puthooran 21 January 2012

One day is a hope/ today is the life/next day will be a dream/// Great write here)))))) 10*****

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Victoria Gauci 21 January 2012

Charming and inspiring Siyabonga.

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Young Church Poetry 21 January 2012

hahahahahaha, yah one day is one day. Love this one too..........

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Pheko Motaung 20 January 2012

Yeah.No need to be gloomy.Much to look forward to.Let's not be cynical.Show the world and the Afro pessimists we're a people for the future.Inspiring poem.Well done.

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