***one Child's Prayer Comments

a humble prayer. congratulations!

hi Sylvi this is such a lovely poem. i also wrote few poems about parents, perhaps you can read them, you'll be able to relate to them. keep writing, you write from a pure heart and mind. take care seema

I have to admit that when I read a writing such as this it makes me long for the daughter I never had . I always wanted a little girl. There's something special between a father and daughter that just can't be replaced if it's missing. That's what I find, when I read your words. Whatever your purpose in writing it, that's what it does to me. You know what that means don't you? I means you're a success. Greenwolfe 1962

From the heart this one Sylvi, I always wished I knew my Dad better too. Its worth a ten in hope. Keep writing. Bob

A delightful suppliction in the language of a child...

very pure and sweet. check out my poem 'Exit'. It is about my father. thank you.

Fully agree with Patricia, some prayers are answered and some wishes are granted. Regards Chris

A beautiful prayer from a child... thank you for sharing.

The bestest prayer I know for repaying a debt of gratitude in full is Nam-myoho-renge-kyo May all your precious dreams come true MCz