Wednesday, March 4, 2015

One Can’t Control His Dreams Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sweet little fairy I saw you smiling,
When your head was resting at my old left arm,
I was mesmerized with the beauty and charm,
Was it your face with so much grace?
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Akhtar Jawad
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Valsa George 05 March 2015

I feel as if marooned in a dream land from where I don't wish to be rescued! The beautiful picture adds to the mesmerizing effect of the poem!

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Khalida Bano Ali 04 March 2015

An amazing poem with a beautiful picture.....................10

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