Monday, October 19, 2009

' One Bright Star Comments

Rating: 2.9

One bright star in the vast unknown
A blazing ember in the night sky shone
Reminding me that I'm not alone...............
One bright star;
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Linda Ori
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Rajesh Thankappan 31 January 2015

A messiah of glad tidings is that one bright star. A brilliant poem though I discovered your poems belatedly. So you are to me that one bright star shining brilliantly in the realm of poetry.

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T McH 27 October 2009

The brightest of stars you are, L.... and you lead many of us to such light. t x

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Shashendra Amalshan 22 October 2009

Hey Congrats indeed! ! you have written 300 poems... This is such a divine poem. your poem is like a ride to heaven. Hey can you really take me to a star? .. I would love to go. This is very nice.. Love Shan

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 20 October 2009

P.S........Belated Congratulations on another poetic benchmark, here on PH... ...................C O N G R A T U L A T I O N S...ON 3 0 0...P O E M S................. _______________________________F j R_______________________________

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 20 October 2009

P.S........Belated Congratulations on another poetic benchmark, here on PH... ...................C O N G R A T U L A T I O N S...ON 3 0 0...P O E M S................. _______________________________F j R_______________________________

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 20 October 2009

Melodious penning, Ms. Midnight...Structurally smooth as satin. As David H. alluded to, and i must concur with...Indeed we all do want that one bright star...the one whose shimmer carries hapiness & peace of mind....There are millions of multitudes of these celestial bodies above us....Enough for each and everyone of us to own as ours....And tht's what ''Wishing'' is all about, right? F j R

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Nimal Dunuhinga 20 October 2009

If this Lone star is multiplicative?

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David Harris 19 October 2009

Linda, we all need that one bright star to build our dream upon. Top marks and thanks for sharing this with us. Hugs David

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Daniel Kempson 19 October 2009

How we need those bright stars 10 Daniel Hope it continues to burn for you.

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Daniel Kempson 19 October 2009

How we need those bright stars 10 Daniel Hope it continues to burn for you.

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Ramesh T A 19 October 2009

Indeed one Star is a great comfort when one is alone! It reminds me of my poem, That Midnight Star! True!

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