Monday, March 6, 2006

*one Breath Against The Wind Comments

Rating: 3.1

One voice, one breath against the wind,
Awed by the fragile life within.
T’is humbling who we really are,
Amazed we made it safe this far,
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Gary Bryson
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Sylvia Spencer 06 March 2006

I loved the content of this poem, it was wonderful to read. The message was perfect. cheers Sylvie

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Emma Beverage 06 March 2006

Good solid poem with a great message. You did a nice job on rhyme and meter also. I gave you a 10.

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