Wednesday, November 27, 2019

One Boat, Many A Storm Comments

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Far off lies one's home
With one boat many a storm,
But storm is life's norm.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 27 November 2019

A perceptive write on life. Brilliantly penned with wonderful rhyme.

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Aniruddha Pathak 27 November 2019

Thanks for vising with such good words, dear poet Rose Marie

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 November 2019

But storm is life's norm........meaningful line, A lovely haiku is amazingly shared. Thank you dear Pathak sir.

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Aniruddha Pathak 27 November 2019

Yes, another name for life is struggle, without which life would hardly evolve. Thanks for visiting dear KM

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 November 2019

An insightful little poem sir! Appreciated the theme.....10

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Aniruddha Pathak 27 November 2019

'An insightful poem' getting a ten, thank you Dr Swain.

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Mahtab Bangalee 27 November 2019

Storm teaches the human the struggle of life!

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Aniruddha Pathak 27 November 2019

Well said, MB, storms teach man, life is struggle. Thanks for visiting.

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