Thursday, May 8, 2008

One Billion To None Comments

Rating: 5.0

Simplify the world to one
just you
and 1 rising sun
would we wake up to a better day?
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Aden Orie
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Carrol Hoffman 12 May 2008

well writen great pice of art one of my favorite poems

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Tyease Collins 09 May 2008

Beautiful One of the best poems I've read ^_^ Tyease

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Tyease Collins 09 May 2008

Beautiful One of the best poems I've read ^_^ Tyease

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Joseph Poewhit 09 May 2008

Nice wish - but GOD made the GOOD & EVIL for our testing place, the JUDGMENT DAY - HEAVEN or OUT THE DOOR

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Sallie Howson 09 May 2008

interesting idea..bravo

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Rebecca Howard 08 May 2008

you are a great poet. and i dont think there is really anything else to say. except keep writing.

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Evaughn Gray 08 May 2008

i agree with Yuri here, your a great poet..keep it up..~Hazel

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Jurietta Duraan 08 May 2008

A lovely poem with very mature insight... thanks for sharing - I really liked it.

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Austin Zaratzian 08 May 2008

that is very good you speak a lot of truth you've got a stong heart, keep it up

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