One Beautiful Night Comments

Beautiful poem. So nice poem. Thanks for sharing your poetic thoughts 100++++++++7+++

what a beautiful poem. It was my dream.. lovly expressions

Colourful buds anxious to bloom He and I, together sitting ashore Free of worries, Free of gloom Everything becoming quiet and silent........the warmth of love expressed in such a powerful manner. thank u dear poetess. tony

wonderful dear friend! lovely content and wonderful imagery it was my dream........ it was my dream...........- very clever.!

The warmth of his love is warmer than the fire I am burning in it from head to toe My eyes are closed and the heart beat stops... What a beautiful dream very nice poem. imaginative.. thank you dear poetess

Its an amazing, mesmerizing poem. Hats off to you. Keep writing :)

Thank you sir for your encouraging comment...

I prayed for you may allah Increase your knowledge and give you courage to face all hardships and always kept smile on your face

Your poetry is brilliant and smiling lines apply on yourself

A very lovely and passionate write. I really like your style of words. Too bad it was a dream and not the real thing. regards

This is beautiful poem, Good luck for you in this competition, Bri bought me here_Soul

Hira, i think this is a fine choice to enter into contest! i will however send a couple of suggestions to you in a separate message. good luck. you have done very well my friend. bri

Yess Sir! ! I agree with you... Thank a lot..So you think sir i should change the title? ?

i just looked at the title again! i guess i should not have been surprised by the ending. maybe other readers (with better memories than mine) would also be surprised if the title was changed to not give away the ending.

this was the work of a fine imagination! ! ! thanks for the poet note. and what a surprise ending! i never came close to having or even imagining such experiences when i was 15, some of the ways you express images and feelings are very, very nice, such as The giggling wind awakening the trees Colourful buds anxious to bloom and: The stars whisper and the moon smiles this may now be my favorite one so far. i'll send it to my Poemlist. :)

beautiful and detail imagery lovely poem thanks for sharing and i invite you to read mine

Its not bad but too much colors and heavy strokes sometimes distort the elegance and symmetry...... Use few good lines and relevant figures to intensity the warmth of your feelings........ Though u r quite new' still one can see a romantic aroma in your lyrics.... .tnx fa sharing

wonderfully woven mental picture with moon, stars and flowers blooming. The protagonist feels the bliss of love though briefly...very imaginative

Wow a lovely epic displaying d ecstasy! Pls coment my poem too. :)

Stunning, u draw the image very well, u r improving day by day, good write