Thursday, March 8, 2012

One Another’s Light Comments

Rating: 4.4

I do not know what brought me here
Away from where I’ve hardly ever been and now
Am never likely to go again.
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Brian Patten
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Jose Gonzalez 16 March 2022

We pass so many may our light no matter how brief pass a positive glow on others

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 March 2022

Be noted that Brian Patten Patten's style is generally lyrical and his subjects are primarily love and relationships. Mesmerizing.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 March 2022

Inspiring write, dear friend, Congratulations being chosen as The Poem Of The Day

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Chinedu Dike 16 March 2022

Well expressed thoughts and feelings, an insightful poem.....

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 November 2021

A true inspiring poem, powerfully worded.5 Stars full

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Nabakishore Dash 07 November 2021

'We pass, and lit briefly by one another's light'.Congrats for such a nice write.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 November 2021

A beautiful poem so well expressed. Very inspiring.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 27 August 2019

Some faces left a mark and I on them might have wrought some kind of charm or spell To make their future work" Grand conceptualization.

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Rajnish Manga 26 May 2017

How one person on another Works an influence. We pass, and lit briefly by one another’s light We co-exist in the society where we are inter-dependent. Knowingly or unknowingly we influence each other to some extent. This fact has nicely been captured in the poem. Thanks, Brian.

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M Sagnik Das 25 May 2017

very good very good..

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Anil Kumar Panda 25 May 2017

Nice poem on how we leave an impression on others when we meet them for a brief period. Nicely done. Congrats.

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Tom Allport 25 May 2017

a poem of believing in someone then hoping they are right? ..........well written.

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 May 2017

Faces are lost! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kayode Are 25 May 2017

Vivid thoughts on how we influence and are influenced by people and places we encounter. Great.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 25 May 2017

To make their futures work... thanks for posting.....

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M Asim Nehal 01 January 2017

Hopeful poem, motovation and inspiring.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 05 August 2013

Hope the way we go is right We all conduct our lives with good faith that our way will be right. Beautiful poem with nice expression. Thank you.

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