I do not know what brought me here
Away from where I’ve hardly ever been and now
Am never likely to go again.
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Be noted that Brian Patten Patten's style is generally lyrical and his subjects are primarily love and relationships. Mesmerizing.
Inspiring write, dear friend, Congratulations being chosen as The Poem Of The Day
A true inspiring poem, powerfully worded.5 Stars full
'We pass, and lit briefly by one another's light'.Congrats for such a nice write.
A beautiful poem so well expressed. Very inspiring.
Some faces left a mark and I on them might have wrought some kind of charm or spell To make their future work" Grand conceptualization.
How one person on another Works an influence. We pass, and lit briefly by one another’s light We co-exist in the society where we are inter-dependent. Knowingly or unknowingly we influence each other to some extent. This fact has nicely been captured in the poem. Thanks, Brian.
Nice poem on how we leave an impression on others when we meet them for a brief period. Nicely done. Congrats.
a poem of believing in someone then hoping they are right? ..........well written.
Vivid thoughts on how we influence and are influenced by people and places we encounter. Great.
Hope the way we go is right We all conduct our lives with good faith that our way will be right. Beautiful poem with nice expression. Thank you.
We pass so many may our light no matter how brief pass a positive glow on others