Friday, July 31, 2009

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You left me here alone,
Remember my heart was cold like stone,
There was so much chemistry between us,
I need to save you, i must!
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Lacey Peter
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Catrina Heart 31 July 2009

You can fly to the heavens above, You were the only one i could love, The world is crumbling underneath my feel, But when i looked at you, My world was complete The pain of being left yet the love soar enormously here...great one! ! !

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Danny H 31 July 2009

This was sad and beautiful filled with pain and love :) I really enjoyed reading it but I think a line may be mispelled The world is crumbling underneath my feel, [feet? ] dont worry Spell checks my best friend: D IM TERRIBLE AT SPELLING

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