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Nicely done. I truly enjoyed this ONE. Thanks for sharing.

One talented writer enough to make one think. t x

ONE Is universal and most needed, , , , , well composed thought with good rhythm **Abha**

All great things seem to be kept into 'one'... One poem Enough To make obvious a deep philosophical thought I liked the rhythm very well. Shortness and intensity are often bound together in your poems Thanks to this chopped rhythm can be felt some emotional matter, which had to the authenticity of your words. Thanks for sharing!

One poem deserves a ten here Shiraz! ! One good read ! ! *10*! ! Best regards, Friend Thad

And in the river you will not come twice... Nightingale. Very touchingly/// ...10... Tsira

WOW! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! that was amazing i say thats the best poems ive evr read seriously! I love it i give it a 10/10 an im addin it 2 my fav poem.