Thursday, June 29, 2006

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As I write, I notice only the details. And the details
amount to only this: the rawness of tanned skin,
the murkiness of new sweat, and
voices cryingly-whispering, shrill and dissonant.
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Ballerina With Fins
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Brian Dorn 29 June 2006

Ballerina, taking a step back and evaluating a relationship can be a good thing as long as the door of possibilities remains open. Great ending, I love the invisible mountains. Brian

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