Once We Met Comments

Not one of us could think of a single word we would change. So fine!

Danny this is powerful indeed and unlike your normal writes, it is unusual as on the surface (to me) it seems lighter than usual but there is a darker undercurrent in this i feel. The buskers part to me seems that you two were the only ones in the right frame of mind to listen, the greasy spoon, suggests you were aware of the unfitting surroundings but just sat there gazing in each others eyes,3 is a smiley continuation (although this whole write could also suggest (to me) many different moments of important meetings) this write just daces through moments, wonderful thank you for sharing karen

Once we met, love the cow herd mooin great poem,

a real splendid write sir it was like i was listening a sweet romantic song and yet i was reading this sweet poem........i think anyone would be delighted to meet you...... thank you for sharing this wonderful piece love, payal

Once we met in poetry land, ain't that grand - excellent write Danny, enjoyed the read.

Enjoyed the alliteration and internal rhymes, good work,