Tuesday, February 25, 2014

Once Was Comments

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You've always been my better half
Always there to make me laugh

Today feels like we're drifting apart
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Lyndsay Thomas
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Mary Forrester 26 February 2014

Well written Lindsay and I know how you feel, been there a few times.

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Nika Mcguin 25 February 2014

Its a topic I'm quite familiar with (have written sloppy verses about lol.) I like that you used very simple rhyme schemes. Sometimes people get so caught up trying to use fancy language that they lose their readers in the midst of it all. A simple, but impacting write, well done. ~NIka

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Lyndsay Thomas

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