Saturday, April 12, 2008

Once Upon My Dream Comments

Rating: 4.5

Analyzing the taunting jolts
within the very soul beneath my skin
drizzling in my vein, echoing
from a secret place
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Saskia Harjono
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Roland Bastien 26 May 2008

molded in complexity: of Aphrodite's most valued charm, of passion and comfort, of fear and discouragement, forming fiery moonlight beam in an eclipse ------------------ This is your master piece so far- the greek Mythology wears a new metaphore under the moonlight beam - Beautiful -

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 14 April 2008

hey saskia you have the touch.............keep up

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Sabrina Jubahar 14 April 2008

Interesting. That's all i can say; interesting.

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