Once Upon A Time In Egypt Comments

its egypt............. great, structure, imagery, vocabulary thanks for sharing

peculiar things happened in Egypt but not as peculiar as Fir'aun how he died?

Sally, this is one of your best poems in my opinion. Your vivid description of the land and personification of the Nile (its cheek - great!) , with a long view of Egypt's history - made me feel I was looking down from the sky at the land, viewing its history and its hopes. Great word pictures and a grand, loving panorama of Egypt's fascinating, exotic history. I'll read this one again to enjoy your gift of language.

This piece is very vivid with some great imagery I've always wanted to visit Egypt and this poem reafirms that wish Thanks Nik

Time less Egypt for all to see, flowing like the Nile like your poetry... Andrew 10

And the Sahara that slept to the sound of the Nile's stories Told its own stories of love and peace that maintain Egypt's prosperity But all Egypt's stories start… once upon a time in heaven I have seen it all now! ! ! very seasoned offering hugs