Once Upon A Time........ Comments

Life is not all show and glitz and of course we should live it in a meaningful and worthy way and within our means. A beautiful message conveyed through a beautiful poem.

I like the form you gave to the poem.In my poems I give mostly this form too.In some it does not seem quite poetical.It looks like prose in verses.But I insist on it.I have noticed that they get a personality with the descriptive form.They stick in your mind.You do not forget them.

ups and downs, pride and fall are common good penning -

Squandering money can drain the wallet of anybody. Money and beauty may not stay with anyone for ever! For those who pride over their wealth and beauty, you have given a valid lesson to learn in life! That presumptuous lady and her effeminate husband should learn the hard lesson!

Money and beauty, so superficial. Far more to life. A very interesting story, Hazel, with quite a profound message.

Money is the crown of Godship- - - - - - -Karl Marx

Very nicely and aptly envisioned. Thrilling phraseology. Thanks for sharing.

very good. interesting style.