Saturday, February 7, 2009

Once Upon A Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

Once,
There was a puppet.
It had no strings, only stuffing.
Staring, understanding eyes.
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Anjali Sinha 04 July 2009

I like this style 'Once upon a time' reminds me of a fairy tale -10 anjali

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Lu-Lu Martin 24 April 2009

Melancholic Love, the stuff of poetry. Great write. I really liked this one. Plus the receding lines in each verse give it an added dimension..10.

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Pamela Lutwyche 08 February 2009

Sad how everything comes to an end. passing time seems to pass and all we have left are memories

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