Saturday, August 26, 2006

Once Upon A Time Comments

Rating: 4.5

Once upon a time
You were here with me
At that time I was happy
Life had a meaning
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Alice Shaw
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Marvin Brato 13 October 2006

Maybe life never had a meaning But then, maybe it still does Please start a composition with this ok, I like to see the positive side that expresses joy being alive. At your age you should see life on its positive perspective. Nevertheles, good poem, I liked it.

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Catastrophe King 04 September 2006

Your words display sadness.... but reveals the immense talent that needs a little nurture. Good work.

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