Monday, December 15, 2014

Once Upon A Time Comments

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Once upon a time
I eagerly awaited a phone call
The cell buzzed and I felt an invitation to the ball
Life was pretty fine
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Rimni chakravarty
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Rajnish Manga 15 December 2014

Life finds another expression in your poem. This is exceptional. The following words say many times more than what they were supposed to: We chatted, giggled.laughed, fought cried for hours (but alas!) Time flew like the migratory birds

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