Once Upon A Time Comments

the once upon a time does a lot in this poem. initially youve made it tenebrous and after comes the idea that the previous views were immatured and theres also a regret of that blissful ignorance that came with being younger. theres other nice touches too like seperating I from the main body of text and then adding more words to it the next time you use I (counting contractions as 2words) and then building it back down again. thats vedy interpretable. very poignant and honest. -M