Monday, May 7, 2012

*once Upon A Time* Comments

Rating: 4.0

A hungry mouse was looking for cheese
Anything, fat free, blue vein, or cheddar would please,
So out of is little hole he stepped an'
Blow me down with a feather
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Ken e Hall
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Alex Daydream 07 May 2012

I really like this. I've just written another depressing poem, and read a few, and this was really refreshing. A great poem, well-rhymed, and just really nice to read :)

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