Sunday, August 25, 2013

Once Upon A Rose (Revised) Comments

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Once upon a time a
trellis was erected
for a delicate flower
to cling to
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Heather Burns
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Unwritten Soul 26 August 2013

Wow...this is a real deal, the rose afraid to open its heart now...._Soul

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Mohabeer Beeharry 26 August 2013

Lovely lovely lovely. Those who hurt don't feel the pain But who are hurt know only feel the pain. A scar. I need to learn here. Mohabeer Beeharry

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Wahab Abdul 25 August 2013

a beautiful write..artistically used the metaphore, ending is super...love is poem....

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