Saturday, May 31, 2008

Once Upon A November Comments

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An empty road a slippery street
Tears of heaven pouring on the ground
A lone star...Looked sadly down
On where she'd wait and he'd leave
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sally sh.
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LOVEFOOL Aka 06 June 2008

This is very good as well.A bit mornfull and full of emotion Good write Nik

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Mohammad Al-kurdi 03 June 2008

Once upon a time in nowhere She looked as he gazed That true moment That never won't be failed great piece Sally Sh............mystery.

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Once upon a November the divinity of scribbled love became one with the fountainhead of love- the mother earth beset I see it in bayonets and blood it has become a manna that make tear-stain to become pearl Beautiful felt piece- I shall carry it with me into the maddening crowds to feel safe Hugs Rehan

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