Thursday, January 21, 2010

'Once Upon A Memory' Comments

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Spin me 'round and 'round again,
Transfer us to way back when.
Slowly images become clear,
'I Love you' is what i hear.
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Mae Bonnin
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Jean Dament 25 January 2010

A lovely poem about sweet past memories being with a loved one. Nicely done. It had a nice natural flow to it. you have 'semptember'it should be spelt September ok

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Straight 2 The Point 22 January 2010

I love the smooth flow in this poem as well as the reality that good times have to pass and sometimes cannot be experienced again.

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