On the dry leafed book of life,
I trace our names with rich soil of faith,
sometimes the waves of time,
overwrite many thoughts
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I still have deep hopes of breaking the separation of space between me and my love too. Loves like that never die distance just hurts. A beautiful and painful piece. May both of us find the healing with our loves.
this is a good type of love poems, however under this simple love sole of the poem, you used some words like castle and galaxies of wonderland to add some fantasy.