Tuesday, May 21, 2019

Once Upon A Dad Comments

Rating: 4.7

Once, my heart was filled to the brim
Your Love, a light that would never dim.

Once, your holy words I hear each dawn
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Besma Dziri
Dad
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Chinedu Dike 22 May 2019

A fine and lofty piece of poetry elegantly crafted in verse with rhythmic splendour. A beautiful work of art, very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing, Besma.

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Besma Dziri 23 May 2019

I'm very pleased to read your fine and generous impressions and appreciation.. thank you so much, Chinedu Dike.. Regards.

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Dr Antony Theodore 22 May 2019

Once, a flower I was in your growing land On your deep roots, I proudly stand. Once upon a Dad A beauty I had.. beautiful relationship. your poem touched our hearts. tony

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Besma Dziri 22 May 2019

Happy to have my humble work touched your soul.. Regards

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james watkin 21 May 2019

A pleasant read. Thanks for sharing

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Besma Dziri 21 May 2019

I'm glad you enjoyed my humble work. Thank you so much.

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