Once There Was A Friend Comments

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But still my well wishes to see you fly Are deep within me until I no longer cry/// beautiful written on the pure friendship nexus // like this

Pathetic and heart wrenching creation, revealing painful sentiment that one feels after ultimate departure of an intimate friend.

Beautifully crafted, an exceptional write. Congratulations from core of my heart for being selected as poem of the day.

A sad and honest write of close encounters that were never right.....well penned.

Friendship! ! To the pages we shared for long! Then came the break up; With a painful song. Heartbreak! ! Lost love! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

A well crafted poem of the day. Congrats, dear ate Mina on your featured piece....10+++

To that black I ignored seeing the white And the distant feeling after a silent fight Fascinating poem!