Tuesday, February 19, 2019

Once The Queen Of Hearts Comments

Rating: 5.0

You invite wolves to share your cozy den
You surround your heart with temporary friends
Most days you live between a smile, a frown
Your mind's as changeable as the wind
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Chris Embrick
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Aniruddha Pathak 20 February 2019

All that the queen that robs hearts is and does. Subtle metaphors and all. Beautiful.

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M Asim Nehal 19 February 2019

Wonderful poem, you used smilies and metaphor to the perfection. Loved it 10+++++++++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 February 2019

A very incisive write. A vivid depiction of double personality. Well penned.

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