Saturday, March 3, 2007

Once Omit I Yearn For Him Comments

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Beaten with words I expect more on my default
Insisting he gratify my impression of the opposing
Subconsciously I justify his moral
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Oni Hayes
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Stug Jordan 19 March 2007

Begins with almost harsh, textbook speech (good thing!) . A change occurs somewhere in the third stanza. This one needs a few reads...

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