Wednesday, October 24, 2018

Once In Darkness Comments

Rating: 5.0

One night returning home from the market place
Street lights suddenly gone.
I could see the road rolling in the headlight of my car.
After driving for some time I reached a place
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
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Rajnish Manga 25 October 2018

What a fantastic narrative! It was like a tale of mystery- so captivating. Thoroughly enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Antony Theodore 24 October 2018

Oh, a beautiful girl I saw among them! She deserved to be a maiden in an oasis To a tired wayfarer who lost his ways in the desert. I politely asked them the way to my locality...i was in a dreamy state. and very fine portrayal of that mental state with clear images......... than k u dear poet. tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 October 2018

From a big puzzle! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 October 2018

The raoming experience in the dark night by driving car has been touchingly and hauntingly inscribed in this poem. I appreciate it. Thanks for sharing.10

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