Once In A Lifetime Love Comments
No matter how she tried
She could never say goodbye
for she had seen forever in his eyes
waters that flowed endlessly down the river
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For a while to have lived your dream - very touching poem. A 10!
I like best writing love poems.....thank you for this fabulous comment.
Forever love poetically penned. Thanks for sharing...10.
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11/2/2025 9:56:14 PM # 1.0.0
last three lines are very nice indeed. " waters that flowed endlessly down the river" unpolluted, i HOPE! bri ;) to MyPoemList...i guess
Thanks Bri! And yes, the ending was my favorite too!