Saturday, July 20, 2013

Once In A Lifetime Comments

Rating: 5.0

Don't come back
With a smile on your face
Don't come back
With roses hidden behind your back
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Ala' Elouri
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Anil Kumar Panda 20 July 2013

Beautiful ink.Loved the way you responded.Keep inking.

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Dave Walker 20 July 2013

A great poem like it, a great write.

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C. P. Sharma 20 July 2013

Life just for a moment winks Why not with it lip sync!

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Xelam Kan™ 20 July 2013

Ya its happens, sometimes such illusions veil our senses....... :) Is it your personal story or just poetic fancies?

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Ala' Elouri

Ala' Elouri

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