Sunday, October 12, 2014

Once In A Blue Moon..... Comments

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Once in a blue moon, luck passes by
Without me knowing, it goes by my side
And though it cries out, I don't realize
But when it's gone, I long for it every night.
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Maira Eliz
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Chinedu Dike 23 February 2018

You have insightfully and wittingly captured the intricacies of luck. Luck being a product of preparation meeting opportunity, one has to be able to identify it whenever it comes knocking on the person's door. Beautiful poem - work of an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing Maira and do remain enriched.

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Maira Eliz 14 October 2017

Thank you

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Jazib Kamalvi 30 September 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Maira. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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