Once I Was 21 Too Poem by me poet yeps poet

Once I Was 21 Too

Rating: 5.0


@21 All girls love smaller trinkets
not gold and diamonds

sweet nothings
one wants to hear
soft words like
rosy
sweety
darling
what are you doing
lovely girl
long hair
you are a pearl
why not to the world
now unfurl

diamonds rubies are no match
but take care this world is wild
and about guy's thinking
you are not now a child

take care poetess
and
convey wisdom
to all your loving friends

aspire to be a poetess
then in love be firm

no hera pherry!
please

Monday, February 4, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and art,love and dreams,love and friendship,poetess,poetic expression
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jagdish Singh Ramána 06 February 2019

thank you sir for your precious poem as concearned to me, at 21. no hera pherry in love- a really motivational for youths.

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Valsa George 06 February 2019

Loved reading this! Here is a sound advice not to fall into the sweet traps laid by cunning men! Sugar coated words are pleasing to the ear, but those who use such words may have ulterior intentions! So don't ever be duped by words of flattery! A 10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 13 February 2019

so diligent of you ma'am Valsa ji thanks do spread my message

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Akhtar Jawad 05 February 2019

Peyar hi mujhe darkar hay, gar unka peyar ho, bahoN ka har ho, tan pe sone chandi ke tar kwya KarooN gi. I recollected this beautiful song from Bollywood after reading this poem.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 13 February 2019

you are a wonder sir and knowledgeable too we read you and get inspired then fired daily by many thanks to u sir ur kind

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Naila Rais 05 February 2019

Nice one............... Naila 👍

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 February 2019

Thanks Naila Rais so kind of you to have come to read my poetry thanksssssssssssss

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