Friday, December 8, 2017

Once I Talked To The Colors Comments

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In search of colors I went to the flowers
I asked the violet, "Why you are violet? "
"God has designed me to suck the violence
I have been sucking this poison, I regret,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Valsa George 11 December 2017

An interesting dialogue with flowers! God has a plan for attributing certain qualities to each of his creation and each one is unique! This uniqueness creates variety! The way you have concluded the poem is a pointer to the bitter reality of the times. The red color of the rose which was a symbol of love has now turned into the color of bloodshed!

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Indira Renganathan 10 December 2017

The way you imagine for the taken theme and bring out that in words is really awesome and laudable....indeed you are a great poet

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 December 2017

An amazing write full of delight. It conveys the differences and attributes from each and everyone. Yet such attributes could be changed due to man's intervention....Interesting piece....10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 December 2017

A wonderful poem! Talents differ. God has attributed each object of nature a different purpose and value. Each has a different need, diverse trait with specific utility. A marvelous rose cannot be equated with a Sunflower, Green Bells, Blue Iris, Wild indigo or any kind of flower have their different charm and utility! Your ‘once I talked to the colors’ is an insightful piece of work! Thanks dear sir for sharing………..10

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Khalid Saifullah 09 December 2017

A nice poem, poet's imagination is astonishing................................

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Ashika 08 December 2017

Nice imagination. Well scripted.Thanks for sharing

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