Friday, March 29, 2013

Once Close To The Sky Comments

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Once close to the sky I heard,
The wind whisper in my ear.
My only companions some big black birds,
Soft gentle whispers, I could hear.
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Juan Olivarez
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Smoky Hoss 02 April 2013

What a beauty Juan! You've sung the song of my soul! I do hope to run into you a way out there, someday. - have you ever read the books: Desert Solitaire by Edward Abbey, or The Desert by John Van Dyke? Great books, that I beleive you'd appreciate my friend. -

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 29 March 2013

nice keybonking metrical high and low almost a poet alway near to sky whispering for the human kind..nice rythm i love this votd for this ten by ten

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Valerie Dohren 29 March 2013

Absolutely beautiful Juan - my kinda poem. Very well done.

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