Saturday, December 2, 2017

Once Caught No More Fears Comments

Rating: 5.0

After thinking many days and nights
Searching a corner of lonely sights
Where there were only dim lights
Remained afraid of bright sun lights
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Akhtar Jawad
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A fascinating poem. Very entertaining.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 December 2017

Kisses are the gates of a lifelong naught. It's golf! A hole, a ball and a claught! .........amazing expression. Thanks for sharing.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 December 2017

Congratulations Sir now you are amongst top 500 No 497 as per PH Some day I may come along to meet thee

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 December 2017

Amazing! I quote, Where there were only dim lights/Remained afraid of bright sun lights. Thank you dear sir for sharing..10

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